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Kiss of Life (PG-13; Bill/Fleur; 150 words)

This one's for me because I'm really tired of seeing Fleur portrayed as a delicate flower (or as a shrew who drives Bill away).

Kiss of Life (PG-13; Bill/Fleur; 150 words)

Curses flew at Bill as he ducked towards the ground into a roll and came up casting a defensive hex that pushed back his pursuers, leaving only one Death Eater on his feet before him. Bill's next spell caught him square in the chest as a shriek rent the air above him. He was on the trembling ground again before he realised he'd been knocked down, and scrambling to retrieve his wand, he saw what had done it: a magnificent white bird with terrible talons ripping open the chest of the foe he'd missed.

There were giants coming, and Bill should have been trying to orient himself with regard to their progress, but he found himself too turned on to move . . . until his avian protector transformed.

"Stupeed!" Fleur shouted, blood flying from her lips as she strode forward and smacked him with a begored hand. "You could 'ave been ki—"


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Jun. 20th, 2010 04:43 pm (UTC)
I agree that Veelas are mostly depicted as having the ability to ensnare men while ignoring their vicious avian characteristics. I'd be interested in reading more stories along the lines you've introduced in this story. Thank you for the drabble.
Jun. 22nd, 2010 04:04 pm (UTC)
You're welcome, and thank you for your response. Fleur's one of those characters that I'd love to write more about. :D
Jun. 20th, 2010 07:44 pm (UTC)
Snicker! Well done, Fleur, and well done, you.
Jun. 22nd, 2010 04:07 pm (UTC)
Thanks! :D
Jun. 21st, 2010 02:31 am (UTC)
Atta girl Fleur! I must say I prefer strong woman characters and FD had mucho potential. Cough cough more please cough
Jun. 22nd, 2010 04:11 pm (UTC)

I'm really glad you liked this. :D
Jun. 22nd, 2010 02:58 pm (UTC)
Nice twist on Fleur, I like to see her this strong.
Jun. 22nd, 2010 04:18 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I may have Sue-d her up a bit, but Veela's aren't all about the sex, darn it!
Jun. 24th, 2010 07:38 pm (UTC)
about Fleur
I thought Fleur wasn't a full fledged Veela, just a quarter-Veela on her grandma (or was it greatgrandm-side)

however the idea of Fleur being a bird animagus to honor her veela heritage is a very cool idea.
Jun. 26th, 2010 03:16 pm (UTC)
Re: about Fleur
Her grandmother was the full Veela in Fleur's family.

It seemed right to me that Fleur would end an avian Animagus because of her heritage, too. :D
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